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Dude

I'm like totaly stoned and this is like totaly awesome.
I put you a ten...

Epic

It was pretty average from the beggining, But that fight was epic! near perfect animation!

I digg it why wont you?

yeah i actually liked it the first time, concentrating more on the complete randomness then the multiple problems of this animation. There isn't much plot to it... what ever plot there was is destroyed by the missing reel so... yeah.

The music fit the mood and is typical of the late 40's wich is exactly what it is suppose to represent. but for the most part, the problem lies in the animation: First of all, there is way too much effort put into the flower in the first scene and not enough effort put into the reste. especialy when the guys walking with the bombs. i mean seriously xP. First of all, The guy has freakin NO TORSO! you can see right through him. and when the guys closing the bag, NO GLOVE! when hes carrying it GLOVES!!! yeah but they didn;t know that, i just know where to look. There are alo plenty of other probleme's that no one will ever realise or care about. except when hes walking.

overall, its kinda funny. i enjoyed it.

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An absolutely inspiring journey through sound! Definitely one of my top 5 favorites in the audition round so far. The composition for this song is really what got me to stop scoring and leave a review as its a balance of striking melodies and a pace that makes the track feel like a living organism. From 1:10 all the way to the end literally made me stand up and hold my headphones up to my ears.

I'll have to be more critical next round but for now all I want to note is that the intro is a bit abrupt, if it would of been longer a more progressive build, starting much quieter (like the middle of your track) I feel like it would of fit the rest of the song a bit better. also your bass rumbles seem to be clipping somehow at 1:24 as well as in other parts in the song. At first I thought it might of been due to the newgrounds waveform but after downloading it I notices it still in the record.

Thumbs up from me buddy! Good luck in the NewGrounds Audio DeathMatch!

Where did this come from and how does this have less than the appropriate amount of listens? Sick nasty dude

Very reminiscent of Blackhole's sound, the pads in the beginning really suck you in and the melodies are great all around. That being said there's quite a bit of clipping in the louder sections and the large amount of reverb and loud pads does muddy up your mix a bit after :50 and 1:45. I think some light side chaining for your kick could probably help a bit too.

All in all great melodies, instrumentation and drums! Keep it up.

feandesign responds:

Thank you! Well yeah, I tried to do the mastering all by myself without that crappy built-in limiter but it turned out to be worse than expected, lol! And I think the main reason for all of that bad stuff was me composing this track in a lower volume, on headphones... probably the worst way to make music - I could use my computer speakers but the thing is that I might be distracting others since I'm not living alone yet. Anyway, I'll consider fixing and updating this song here, once again thanks a lot for pointing out all those problems as well as the pros of this track. Much appreciated!

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Simon Cameron @aliaspharow

Age 29, Male

Musician

Some College Somewhere

Binghamton, NY

Joined on 9/4/07

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