Nice!
I gota say! I'm pretty impressed by what you set up here but the lack of reverb in most parts of the song leaves something to be desired. I swear i like all the instruments you put in here and all there respective melodys but some sequencing you did did catch me a little off guard.
- First off all, as i said, if you really want to make this song sound complete, you need to put some reverb in there. dont let there be a dry second because that is definitly the weak point in this song.
- Second of all, some bass furthur in the song would be good! like what you did from 1:50 to 2:14 but something that stays from that point on would be preferable. At least make it fade out because im sure you didnt want it to sound that way!
-Last but not least, fix the ending. I just hate awkwerd silences!
Nice use of the piano and reverb in the areas that you used it. I really like the drums too but they would sound alot better with some reverb.
Note: This would make a freakin awesome Hip-Hop song if you try putting in everything ive told you!
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5/5